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Bodhi Tree
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 Posted - Jul 28 2013 : 11:41:03 PM
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This post could easily go in the poetry section, but the topic of the poem surrounds a relationship, and since I'm so fond of cloaking my words in poetic spins, I'm just gonna roll with it.
The presence of stillness is certainly the foundation in Bodhi's body-mind (as well as the divine woman who will not be named), but that does not negate the reality of my human experience. Just want to reveal my vulnerability and keep my spiritual ego honest. Thanks for reading. Unity!
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my head is twisted and my heart is reeling
yet another woman eludes my grasp
the ingredients of my formula have not yet yielded any longstanding concoction
all has bubbled away in spurts of short passion and confusion
though it is all bound to bubble away anyway
surely there are ones who go the distance together in happiness in this earthly body
never perfect, yet they hold hands until the very end
i see it in my grandparents
it seems like a worthy endeavor to embark upon
perhaps one day i will bask in that union
and bring new life into the world, so that a child can experience the same folly and redemption i am undergoing
until then
i let go, and let God. |
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Shanti
USA
4854 Posts |
Posted - Jul 29 2013 : 08:06:23 AM
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(((((HUG)))))
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whippoorwill
USA
450 Posts |
Posted - Jul 29 2013 : 3:06:48 PM
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Let it go. Let go.
You don't know who will pass by,
Turn, and take your hand.
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Bodhi Tree
2972 Posts |
Posted - Jul 29 2013 : 7:52:49 PM
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Thank you for continuing the poetry with great simplicity, whippoorwill. That is very uplifting.
Shanti, I'll catch you on the flipside!
Inner sensuality. |
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rothandy
India
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Posted - Nov 20 2014 : 06:55:47 AM
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| Sensuality in the poem.... Very Healthy poetry :P |
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Dogboy
USA
2193 Posts |
Posted - Nov 20 2014 : 2:04:28 PM
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quote:
until then
I let go, let God
EVEN then, let go let God ! |
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Bodhi Tree
2972 Posts |
Posted - Nov 20 2014 : 4:04:32 PM
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I whine too much.  |
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Anima
484 Posts |
Posted - Nov 21 2014 : 4:25:34 PM
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quote:
Originally posted by Bodhi Tree
Unity!
U.N.I.T.Y.: That spells "unity."
~Queen Latifa
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Bodhi Tree
2972 Posts |
Posted - Nov 21 2014 : 6:12:44 PM
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| Yeah baby!! |
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